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Life Long Fight

As I lay there thinking why,
I can't help but break down and cry,

My life's destiny in small black words,
What did I do for all this hurt?

For all these years I did nothing but try,
Now i wonder, is tomarrow my good-bye?

There is treatment along with the pain,
Do I really want to play this game?

I am only sixteen...
So, what does this mean?

And so I lay here at night,
I realize, I start my life long fight...

--Katherine Anderson--
©2009 *Kit-Kat43040
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i know this is a horible poem, i am not a writter at all, but this is how i felt the min i found out about myositis and how i feel not even a week or 2 later, myositis cant be cured i am 1 out of few who have this and now i can say i am a fighter of myositis, but to be honest i rather have this then any of my friends or family i just hope i am strong enough to do this fight...

i will say anyone who reads this who is fighting myositis that your not alone, you might feel like you are like i do but we arnt

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wt are you talking about its a great poem! i realy think your coragous to fight these disase and i relay wish you th best of luck im sure you can do it. anyways about your poem it realy is good the ryms are fluent and it has emotion

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I look at you,you look at me now i know why the best things in life are free <3 9*10*09
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That's not bad are you kidding me? That is freaking amazing.. Sorry bout the whole myositis thing...
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If you used true emotion, which you did, it can't be bad. I rather like it.

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rain flow to the roots
rain drench my boots
rain douse the flame
rain forget this poet's name
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